April 9, 2009
Diane Kunigis -
The story line was very entertaining; however, what I feel would make it stronger is if you used sound effects to describe a few of the actions. Also, you mention that Harriet Tubman has a problem slurring her words later on in her life, so it may be a cool effect if you were to slur your words to signify that.
Allan Kunigis -
The narrative was good, but I would think about adding in music, or sound effects to contribute to the feeling or tone of the story.
Sources:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harriet_Tubman – information
http://www.math.buffalo.edu/~sww/0history/hwny-tubman.html - information
http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/aia/part4/4p1535.html - information
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Harriet_Tubman.jpg – picture
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